Lala Merx Poet Pantoum

Rain

When you stand in the rain
And everything comes crushing down
Give a penny for your thought
Leave a space for your heart

And everything comes crushing down
Insanity, sorrow, agony, pain
Leave a space in your heart
Save a place for peace and clarity

Insanity, sorrow, agony, pain
Give a penny for your thoughts
Save a place for peace and clarity
When you stand in the rain

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper July 26, 2013 at 2:08 PM A penny for your thoughts behind this one, very interesting. Thanks for sharing this one with us -I like! MC

Poet Tacito July 19, 2013 at 10:24 AM Let your mind reflect during the raindrops, but only enough to make the clouds disappear and let the sun return. This was deep. Very, very well done!

Andrea Dietrich July 14, 2013 at 1:33 AM I like this short pantoum verse. Very nice. Lala Merx July 14, 2013 at 2:23 AM oh, Thank you :D