Rain

the rain falls 
from a gloomy sky
my feet are wet
searching for
something barely remembered

the sand is wet
from above and below
rain joins ocean
my footprints wash away
leaving lonely puddles
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Sergi Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 5:56 PM
enjoyed reading this one tonight wonderful
Sivey Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 8:20 PM
I love the depth of this incredible write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! You sparked an imaginative vision into my head by this piece! Great Work!!
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