Rain

We walk together,
Our shoulders touch every now and then,
The rain pouring down your umbrella.
The cold bites.  We hardly talk.
But we find pleasure 
In smelling the rain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 21, 2016 at 9:04 PM
Lorenzo, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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January 15, 2016 at 9:12 PM
Lorenzo, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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