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Rain

We walk together, Our shoulders touch every now and then, The rain pouring down your umbrella. The cold bites. We hardly talk. But we find pleasure In smelling the rain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/21/2016 9:04:00 PM
Lorenzo, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/15/2016 9:12:00 PM
Lorenzo, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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