Rain

Sweet condensation! You've came to rescue me Cleanse me and bathe me Wash away this misery Will you return me To the way things used to be? Or just desert me And leave me to my grief

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2012 11:33:00 AM

DONALD, congrats with your entry in Carol's rain contest.. have yourself a nice one... always~PD

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/30/2012 9:08:00 PM

Oh so many griefs. Hope the rain was a blessing. congratulaions. Love, Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2012 12:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest Donald. I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

Donald Reith
Date: 8/30/2012 1:45:00 PM

Thanks so much Carol! It was an honor and congrats to all the other winners!