Rain

Sweet condensation!

You've came to rescue me 

Cleanse me and bathe me

Wash away this misery 

Will you return me

To the way things used to be? 

Or just desert me

And leave me to my grief
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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September 1, 2012 at 11:33 AM
DONALD, congrats with your entry in Carol's rain contest.. have yourself a nice one... always~PD
Johnson Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 9:08 PM
Oh so many griefs. Hope the rain was a blessing. congratulaions. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 12:23 PM
Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest Donald. I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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August 30, 2012 at 1:45 PM
Thanks so much Carol! It was an honor and congrats to all the other winners!
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