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Home » Poems » Doris Culverhouse » Rain

Rain

humming patter drips Refreshing flow revive mud patties natural

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Jack Horne
Date: 10/31/2011 1:32:00 PM
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love the sound/visuals in this one, Doris
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Bl Devnath
Date: 9/6/2011 9:54:00 AM
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wonderful write my friend, really it's rain. God bless us all. bl
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Jack Horne
Date: 9/5/2011 4:36:00 PM
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Lovely write on the rain, Doris - my favourite weather (even if your poor old rooster wouldn't agree, LOL)
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Michael J. Falotico
Date: 9/5/2011 9:43:00 AM
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Oh I love poems on rain... And my dear I am on 4th cup already this morning... luv Michael
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Elizabeth Wesley
Date: 9/4/2011 8:34:00 PM
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I remember as a kid being out in the rain doing just what you have described. Brings back memories.
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Richard Pickett
Date: 9/4/2011 7:38:00 PM
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Nice Haiku, Doris...great flow....God Bless....Taz
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 9/4/2011 4:29:00 PM
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Oh, I loved making those mud patties as a kid, Doris. Just glad I didn't eat them. LOL Very clever and witty haiku! Love, Carolyn
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