Rain-

We took no notice of a sky turning gray
Upon the ever changing, brooding afternoon
The rain at last, that finally tiptoed in
We almost missed the laughter, but for leaves
That murmured quick surprise along the eaves
And tapped with chatter on the window-pane
But having heard, we left our cozy place
And stepped outside into the evening air
To feel the slope of rain upon our faces
And could even hear the rustling trees
Pitter patter,  dripping laughter
With song of raindrops in the night
                                   ~    
prelude to bedtime
rain comes as a child
behind leaden eyes
and indignation
sky puckers up
with an angry brow
and brooding face
sputtering
with warm tears-
howling pleas
day weeps
til’ night
sleeps
   ~

                                                
              Do not cry or lament the rain
                       Just look for where the rainbow begins
                                         ~



a sobering sky

    spills a tear upon the dust...
  
         earth's quivering chin

                  ~

   
Free Verse/Nonet/Crystalline/Haiku
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mannan Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 6:16 AM
Many warmest congrats Carrie for this superb write.
Susan Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 5:39 AM
Congrats on winning the contest. A wonderful piece!
Brown Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 5:09 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie in Nikko's "Anagram" contest. Love, Carol
Magness Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 8:32 PM
Great win Carrie with such a wonderful entry!! Congratulations. Brian
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 3:12 PM
CArrie, this is a lovely win, dear. What a cool angagram,a crier, to relate to rain!!
Devonshire Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 3:06 PM
As I said when I first read this poem, it's "extraordinary"! Congratulations on taking the top spot, Carrie. So happy for you. Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 2:13 PM
Congratulations on your win in this great contest..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 1:30 PM
Congrats Carrie on your super first place win in Nikko's great contest with this exceptional entry .. so special .. enjoy your top spot with luv..
Buckeridge Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 1:01 PM
Sorry it's meant to say congrats on winning xxx
Buckeridge Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 1:00 PM
Contests on winning :o)
Guzzi Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 12:43 PM
Yikers my brain cells are fried! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Lenth Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 11:46 AM
Very rich imagery. Refreshing and fitting for the season. Congratulations!
K. Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 10:57 AM
Super duper congrats to you Carrie :D!! I was just wowed and moved by this and of how you used another write (a challenging one too) as an inspiration was just awesome -- you've used your anagram so well in your write-- hugs, thank you for this amazing entry :) honestly loved each form that you used here :)
Mehta Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 10:49 AM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, carrie
Poet Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 1:02 PM
Excellent Imagery here Carrie!Liked it very much.Goodluck in the contest---kashinath
Devonshire Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 2:38 PM
Extraordinary images from an amazing writer! I like the message too, Carrie. Let's try not to cry when things look gloomy -- instead we should be seeking out the rainbows. Terrific entry for Nikko's contest. I love the anagram of your name that you chose. Best wishes for success! Love, Carolyn
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