Rain

MONSOON storm deluge
Soothe the desert savage thirst
Life given reprieve
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 28, 2010 at 11:05 AM
I really love this one. ~
Winter Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 5:59 AM
wonderful haiku - makes me feel thirsty : )). a warm thank you Paula for sponsoring your contests and for the honor of placing. so sincerely appreciated. love, shar
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May 19, 2010 at 2:56 PM
Very beautiful Haiku!
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