"rain"

I love to sit and watch the rain..
The sound as it hits my window pane..
Like wet rays of sun from the sky..
Big raindrops like beams pass on by..
Puddles of sunshine that fill the cracks..
Opens doors so the water can distract..
Cool drops of rain refresh my face..
I close my eyes to a sunny place..
The smell that comes from a morning shower
Sets free a sound from birds to the summer..
By my window the sky is grey..
But this little shower will bring a sunny day..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kapoor Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 9:23 AM
Outstandingly beautiful Poem. Very well written my friend. I too love rain and your raindrops have wet me as well. Great write. Love and best wishes... Ravindra... Michael J Falotico
Culverhouse Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 7:35 AM
very appropriate for my rainy day!! LOL
Kendrick Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 5:36 AM
Great rhythm and rhyme in this one...It is pouring down here as I type this comment even as I type there is thunder...Interesting that I would chose this one to read...Your descriptiveness brought it alive on the page..Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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May 3, 2010 at 5:21 AM
sounds like freedom of the soul, enjoyed the rain in your write,..p.d.
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