Rain

for Nanay who left for celestial embrace





Hello, you. I’m speaking to you, in heavy
breathing, because last night it rained 
while I was asleep and dreaming

your lips: the thirst-worn cracks 
of red, the silence they heaved. 
Some truths, of mostly naked. 

Like your tale of fairies flying, 
finding their way home into trunks
of trees. Like your kiss in dreams 

of that which bridges you to me. 
Have you kissed me, stolen
like your promise I once believed 

before you turned your back and left 
and kept those lips, in sleep?
Hello, you. I cannot figure. Only that 

it has been a struggle to breathe,
and sleep and dream deep 
now and each night rain begins.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
December 27, 2024 at 4:28 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 24, 2016 at 7:11 PM
cayetano young, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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January 15, 2016 at 7:12 PM
Cayetano, I like every line on your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
Cc Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 10:18 AM
Now this one I like. Your second stanza is genius. Can't believe this is my first post after four years ha ha. Keep it up!
Iyer Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 5:41 AM
Wonderful Poetry. Congratulations
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June 3, 2010 at 9:10 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Gino. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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May 31, 2010 at 2:44 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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May 3, 2010 at 6:52 PM
Congratulations Gino on youyr worthy poem feature this seek. Agape, Moses
Fisher Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 9:16 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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May 3, 2010 at 3:57 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup. May you have many more features Gino. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
January 5, 2010 at 11:15 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Gino. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. Love, Carol
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January 5, 2010 at 8:42 AM
I like this, it's dark and enchanting at the same time. I love your description of lips: "the thirst-worn cracks of red, the silence they heaved. Some truths, of mostly naked." Good stuff. ~ KC
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