Rain

Shadow has lifted,

illumination complete

Farewell fleeing rain

naturehaiku

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James Fraser

June 13, 2010 at 2:18 PM

It's goodbye to the rains, and hello to the sun. But when the grounds become dry, the rains are so welcome > thank you for your kind comments Karla >> James

John Freeman

January 26, 2010 at 6:53 PM

A vivid Haiku Karala, sincerely, Moses

Raul Moreno

December 17, 2009 at 12:37 AM

Beautiful haiku Karla, your comment meant a lot to me...Raul

Jimmy Anderson

October 12, 2009 at 9:00 AM

This is very nice. Thank you for comments on " Me & Prison" No it's not a nice place - I would not say "for anyone", Some people need to be in here! I don't have much more time..18 months. Talk to you later Jimmy