It is said that it rains twice under trees. Once when it rains; the second time, when the wind shakes the water from the branches.
The thunderstorm has passed. A sparrow at the birdfeeder under the tree tilts its head, catching the morning sun, deftly snatching up a stray droplet as it is shaken loose by a breeze. The chicks are impatient for their feed. twice rain under the peppertree stained slippers
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