Rain

RAIN Drizzle Soft Showers Wet streets are gleaming Footsteps splashing puddles Cold drops kiss my face again “Childhood storms dancing on my skin”
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Wolf Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 7:07 PM
Yeah. That last line is a real winner, Brenda.
Chiri Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 7:53 AM
Gershon you are too kind my friend! Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 8:53 AM
Wow great image that last line is. Congrats on the win
Chiri Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 7:53 AM
Andrea I appreciate your comment and read ! Thank you!
May Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 4:59 PM
Very nicely penned Brenda, Congrats on your win
Chiri Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 8:30 PM
Joseph thank you so much for the contest and gif the read!;)
Fleming Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 1:36 PM
Wow!! And I mean...a big 'WOW'. I really do like it when you write like this, Brenda Lee. Should have received more attention. As always...simple is best. Good stuff!! :) john
Chiri Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 8:30 PM
Thank you John!;)
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