Rain

Teardrops of the angel engulf the world
The immense of despair unfurls
The inevitability of sorrow consumes the universe
In the shadows anguish and agony lurks
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Agustin Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 8:50 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Ashley Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 6:02 PM
Dear Suhavee, beautifully poetic melancholy spills from your pen. Such poignant expression from the depths of a poet's soul released upon the page can't help but touch the soul of your reader... this piece is a sad beauty indeed. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Sethi  Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 6:52 PM
Thank you!
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