Rain

Teardrops of the angel engulf the world The immense of despair unfurls The inevitability of sorrow consumes the universe In the shadows anguish and agony lurks

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Beata Agustin

Date: 5/7/2024 8:50:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/5/2024 6:02:00 PM

Dear Suhavee, beautifully poetic melancholy spills from your pen. Such poignant expression from the depths of a poet's soul released upon the page can't help but touch the soul of your reader... this piece is a sad beauty indeed. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Suhavee Sethi
Date: 5/5/2024 6:52:00 PM

Thank you!