Rain

I ambled down to the beach To adore the misery of twilight I Lit the red candle's of hope Cloud's whispered together Showered me with wishes Red petal's came together Floating in happiness I stretched out my hand To say thankyou For the best present i ever had

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Beata Agustin

Date: 8/19/2024 7:20:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.