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Rain

A Natural Ninette Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Kim Merryman
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                                        rain
                                     rainbow
                                    in the sky
                                 drops of water
                               liquid arrows shot
                                   by an archer
                                   from his bow
                                      fearing
                                     drought

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Date: 8/20/2023 1:32:00 PM
Congratulations!! Way to go with this excellent winner. Sara
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Srinivas Veepuri
Date: 8/28/2023 9:26:00 AM
Thank you, Sara.
Date: 8/20/2023 9:51:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem ... well done :) -
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Srinivas Veepuri
Date: 8/28/2023 9:27:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise Anderson.
Date: 8/20/2023 6:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning entry!
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Srinivas Veepuri
Date: 8/28/2023 9:27:00 AM
Lin Lane, Thank you very much.
Date: 8/19/2023 3:01:00 PM
Srinivas, I like the image of an archer shooting arrows of rain. Creative write! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Srinivas Veepuri
Date: 8/28/2023 9:38:00 AM
Kim, thank you for your appreciation.

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