Srinivas Veepuri Poet Ninette

Rain

A Natural Ninette Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Kim Merryman
Placed 4th
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                                        rain
                                     rainbow
                                    in the sky
                                 drops of water
                               liquid arrows shot
                                   by an archer
                                   from his bow
                                      fearing
                                     drought

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Sara Kendrick August 20, 2023 at 1:32 PM Congratulations!! Way to go with this excellent winner. Sara Srinivas Veepuri August 28, 2023 at 9:26 AM Thank you, Sara.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 20, 2023 at 9:51 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem ... well done :) - Srinivas Veepuri August 28, 2023 at 9:27 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise Anderson.

Lin Lane August 20, 2023 at 6:01 AM Congratulations on your winning entry! Srinivas Veepuri August 28, 2023 at 9:27 AM Lin Lane, Thank you very much.

Kim Merryman August 19, 2023 at 3:01 PM Srinivas, I like the image of an archer shooting arrows of rain. Creative write! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M Srinivas Veepuri August 28, 2023 at 9:38 AM Kim, thank you for your appreciation.