Rain

I listened for the rain,
 it emerged slowly now and again
  from a crepuscular caliginus sky,
the tenebrous mist that trickled down lightly in the by and by
 as if they were drops of salted tears 
  shed by an unseen entity's fears;
it was the dream that seemed far away
 to hover throughout the day
  with scattered light cool breezes 
beating and flushing the tree leaves into the eaves,
 spitting, spewing, snaking, swirling for all to see
 stretching just above the distant canopies;
for once the weather predictions were spot on,
 it remained overhead for three days within the briar
 each day more intense than the prior,
no reprieves as it fell west to east
 and cycled back again from the ocean to land to feast
 on shorelines, forests and homes as if a wild, relentless beast;
the drops were big and cold
 chilled by some northeast winter's scold
 quiet then loud drumming on every roof,
streams and puddles formed aloof
 into places where footsteps once abound,
 the earthy musk odors rising from the ground,
now the lush grass rolled over
 patted down the pelted clover
 bowing in submission to the stormy drover;
I heard its' tumultuous cry
 rocking, pitching while on the fly
 without a whisper or a word before it died,

I heard it,

the rain sighed.

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Date: 4/30/2023 11:16:00 PM
"the tenebrous mist that trickled down lightly in the by and by as if they were drops of salted tears " Lovely description of the rain that began as gently falling drops and later grew into drumming strokes on the roof and paved way to puddles and streams. Powerful composition. Thanks DM for your kind visit to my page.
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Date: 4/30/2023 12:47:00 AM
DM, So nice in drops, your rain's beauty in sigh. -Richard
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