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RAIN showers fluid joy. You came through drizzle tresses shined with pearl drops charmed me with gleam of first love. “Romance blooms in vase of nature”. _____________ April 11, 2023 Syllable count checked with HMS Contest : Pyramids 3---7 Lines Sponsored by : Joseph May

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Date: 5/2/2023 9:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win for this lovely springtime love poem. So much said in only 7 lines. Carol Louise
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Date: 4/29/2023 4:36:00 PM
Congratulations! Very nice, Subimal!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/30/2023 10:15:00 PM
Thank you, Kim for your nice comment.
Date: 4/29/2023 11:48:00 AM
- A beautiful flower with pearl drops, Subimal :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/30/2023 10:15:00 PM
Thank you, SS.
Date: 4/29/2023 9:59:00 AM
Romantically penned Subimal. Very nice! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/30/2023 10:14:00 PM
Thank you, Linda for your encouraging comment.
Date: 4/29/2023 9:04:00 AM
Lovely write Subimal, Congrats on your win
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/30/2023 10:14:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph for the placement.
Date: 4/11/2023 11:51:00 PM
Love this... I love rain and it's ambiance. God bless you - Love, Gina
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/30/2023 10:13:00 PM
Thank you, Regina for liking the poem.

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