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RAIN drizzle splattering leaky rubber boots jumping into puddles raindrops running down my cheeks “water droplets obscure the skies” (Clarity Pyramid) 04/10/2023 Pyramids3---- 7 Lines Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May How Many Syllables Clarity Pyramid Created by Jerry P. Quinn, a Clarity Pyramid is a poem consisting of two triplets and a single line (7 lines in all). Usually, this poem is center-aligned. The first triplet has 1, 2, and 3 syllables. The poem's title is the one-syllable word of the first triplet, which is in all capital letters, followed by a two-syllable line, and a three-syllable line, both of which clarify the definition of the poem or are synonyms for the title. The second triplet has 5, 6, and 7 syllables. Its design is based on a life event within the triplet which helps give a poetic view or outlook on the first line (title). The last line is eight syllables and is in quotations as this line contains a quote that defines the first word, your title.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2023 4:03:00 PM

I love your verse, Emile. BIg congrats.

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/30/2023 4:17:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Akanksha Ayantika

Date: 4/29/2023 9:19:00 PM

The puddles are a memory in themselves. Congratulations on the win!

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/30/2023 9:22:00 AM

Thanks, Akanksha, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/29/2023 4:43:00 PM

Love the line: raindrops running down my cheeks! Congratulations, Emile!

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/30/2023 9:22:00 AM

Thanks, Kim, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/29/2023 12:14:00 PM

- As a child I love to jump in puddles... my feet were always wet ... and my mother was not happy :) - Congratulations on your win, Emile :) - hugs

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/29/2023 1:21:00 PM

Thanks, Sunshine, I appreciate the memories you've shared through your comments, my friend, Emile.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/29/2023 10:23:00 AM

Ah, puddles. A child's best friend - with, or without boots! Congratulations on your win my friend Emile! :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/29/2023 1:20:00 PM

Thanks, Linda, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Joseph May

Date: 4/29/2023 9:43:00 AM

Very nicely penned Emile, Congrats on your win

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/29/2023 1:19:00 PM

Thanks, Joseph, I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend, Emile.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/10/2023 10:46:00 AM

Hello Emile if the boots leaks it is time to get new rain boots. There will be puddles for the birds. Enjoyed this poem my friend. Enjoy your day./Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/10/2023 3:51:00 PM

Hello Emile, You are right the boots did not last long in those days. Thank you Emile. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/10/2023 12:33:00 PM

Thanks, Darlene, boots didn't last long back in the day...as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.