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Rain

RAIN drizzle splattering leaky rubber boots jumping into puddles raindrops running down my cheeks “water droplets obscure the skies” (Clarity Pyramid) 04/10/2023 Pyramids3---- 7 Lines Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May How Many Syllables Clarity Pyramid Created by Jerry P. Quinn, a Clarity Pyramid is a poem consisting of two triplets and a single line (7 lines in all). Usually, this poem is center-aligned. The first triplet has 1, 2, and 3 syllables. The poem's title is the one-syllable word of the first triplet, which is in all capital letters, followed by a two-syllable line, and a three-syllable line, both of which clarify the definition of the poem or are synonyms for the title. The second triplet has 5, 6, and 7 syllables. Its design is based on a life event within the triplet which helps give a poetic view or outlook on the first line (title). The last line is eight syllables and is in quotations as this line contains a quote that defines the first word, your title.
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Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 4:03 PM
I love your verse, Emile. BIg congrats.
Pinet Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 4:17 PM
Thanks, Andrea, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Ayantika Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 9:19 PM
The puddles are a memory in themselves. Congratulations on the win!
Pinet Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 9:22 AM
Thanks, Akanksha, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 4:43 PM
Love the line: raindrops running down my cheeks! Congratulations, Emile!
Pinet Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 9:22 AM
Thanks, Kim, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Andresen Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 12:14 PM
- As a child I love to jump in puddles... my feet were always wet ... and my mother was not happy :) - Congratulations on your win, Emile :) - hugs
Pinet Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 1:21 PM
Thanks, Sunshine, I appreciate the memories you've shared through your comments, my friend, Emile.
Fowler Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 10:23 AM
Ah, puddles. A child's best friend - with, or without boots! Congratulations on your win my friend Emile! :)
Pinet Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 1:20 PM
Thanks, Linda, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
May Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 9:43 AM
Very nicely penned Emile, Congrats on your win
Pinet Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 1:19 PM
Thanks, Joseph, I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend, Emile.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 10, 2023 at 10:46 AM
Hello Emile if the boots leaks it is time to get new rain boots. There will be puddles for the birds. Enjoyed this poem my friend. Enjoy your day./Darlene\
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 10, 2023 at 3:51 PM
Hello Emile, You are right the boots did not last long in those days. Thank you Emile. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\
Pinet Avatar
April 10, 2023 at 12:33 PM
Thanks, Darlene, boots didn't last long back in the day...as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
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