Rain

Rain rain washing over making things new reviving you in the beautiful blue rain rain a fresh start cleanse your soul lost in the surrender of letting go relaxing in the beautiful flood the world goes on just because rain rain theres nothing quite like it walking in the rain in the beautiful breeze refreshing and sweet rain rain restoring our lives and laughing in the pain rain

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/24/2023 3:55:00 AM

- A beautiful write about rain - In Norway we have far too much rain... winter, spring, summer and autumn... sometimes it seems like it will never end... :) - Many thanks for your comment on my poem :) - Have a wonderful weekend, Charity :) - hugs

Charity Johnson
Date: 3/24/2023 3:57:00 AM

Thanks for your comment ! :) I love the rain :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/23/2023 4:46:00 AM

"letting go relaxing in the beautiful flood the world" - A very beautiful writing.

Charity Johnson
Date: 3/23/2023 10:05:00 PM

Thanks for your comment ! :)

Fin Chuuk

Date: 3/21/2023 6:31:00 PM

Oh the sweetness of rain. Really an awesome write, Charity. :)

Charity Johnson
Date: 3/21/2023 8:12:00 PM

Thanks so much for your comment ! :)

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/20/2023 2:00:00 PM

I enjoyed your refreshing take on the rain, Charity. Your poetic words make one feel lighthearted and hopeful. Great poem! :)

Charity Johnson
Date: 3/20/2023 5:31:00 PM

Thanks so much for your comment ! :) I appreciate it :)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 3/20/2023 7:17:00 AM

Nice penning Charity , really refreshing write. Over here in Scotland it's not stopped pouring all day! Hope things are drier in Canada. Blessings,Gordon

Charity Johnson
Date: 3/20/2023 7:44:00 AM

Thanks , yes we actually have snow here at the moment :)

Weston Gregory

Date: 3/12/2023 8:56:00 PM

There is a sense of obscuring the depth of this piece on rain, yet its amongst our most fun time. nice write

Charity Johnson
Date: 3/12/2023 9:05:00 PM

Thanks :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/12/2023 7:51:00 PM

Hi Charity, I do enjoy the rain, this is a pretty one :)

Charity Johnson
Date: 3/12/2023 7:54:00 PM

Thanks so much for your comment ! :)