Rain

Rain rain washing over making things new 
reviving you in the beautiful blue rain rain
a fresh start cleanse your soul lost in the surrender
of letting go relaxing in the beautiful flood the world
goes on just because rain rain theres nothing quite like it
walking in the rain in the beautiful breeze refreshing and sweet
rain rain restoring our lives and laughing in the pain rain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Andresen Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 3:55 AM
- A beautiful write about rain - In Norway we have far too much rain... winter, spring, summer and autumn... sometimes it seems like it will never end... :) - Many thanks for your comment on my poem :) - Have a wonderful weekend, Charity :) - hugs
Johnson Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 3:57 AM
Thanks for your comment ! :) I love the rain :)
Alex Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 4:46 AM
"letting go relaxing in the beautiful flood the world" - A very beautiful writing.
Johnson Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 10:05 PM
Thanks for your comment ! :)
Chuuk Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 6:31 PM
Oh the sweetness of rain. Really an awesome write, Charity. :)
Johnson Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 8:12 PM
Thanks so much for your comment ! :)
Leiser Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 2:00 PM
I enjoyed your refreshing take on the rain, Charity. Your poetic words make one feel lighthearted and hopeful. Great poem! :)
Johnson Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 5:31 PM
Thanks so much for your comment ! :) I appreciate it :)
Mcconnell Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 7:17 AM
Nice penning Charity , really refreshing write. Over here in Scotland it's not stopped pouring all day! Hope things are drier in Canada. Blessings,Gordon
Johnson Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 7:44 AM
Thanks , yes we actually have snow here at the moment :)
Gregory Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 8:56 PM
There is a sense of obscuring the depth of this piece on rain, yet its amongst our most fun time. nice write
Johnson Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 9:05 PM
Thanks :)
Faulkner Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 7:51 PM
Hi Charity, I do enjoy the rain, this is a pretty one :)
Johnson Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 7:54 PM
Thanks so much for your comment ! :)
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