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Rain

rain poured, the dwy slowly passed by, sunlight broke.... ducks returned to pond's deep depths blustery breeze whipped fallen leaves, ushering in north air ice spewed, earth shivers sunlight's welcomed warmth by day, hibernation dens huddling conserves heat by night
7-5-7 7-7-5 5-7-7 Written: 12-15-2022 First attempt at new forms... dwy-noun-a gusty flurry or shower, a brief squall or storm accompanied by precipitation. Contest: Triple New Charlieku Sponsor: Charles Messina
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Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 10:24 AM
congrats on your win with this sweet charming set, Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 11:09 AM
Why, thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara
Poet Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 6:46 AM
So well done, Sara. Simply beautiful. Your win is well-deserved. Congratulations
Kendrick Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 11:06 AM
Thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Sara
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 4:51 AM
Nice penning cold concluding cuddles, Sara, congratulations on your win my friend, Aloha William
Kendrick Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 11:01 AM
Thank you, William for dropping by with congrats. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara
Alex Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 9:57 PM
"deep depths", "huddling conserves heat" - Scenic. Congratulations!
Kendrick Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 3:49 AM
Alex, Thanks for dropping by with congratulations. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara
Messina Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 8:43 PM
Lovely haiku's, Sara. Reads like a winner...and it is! Congratulations on your win! Happy New Year! Charlie
Kendrick Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 3:46 AM
Thank you, Charles for dropping by and letting me know and congratulating me. I hope your New Year is awesome. Sara
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2022 at 3:57 AM
- I enjoy this lovely poem, Sara ... if it is for contest ... best wishes :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
December 16, 2022 at 4:05 AM
Thank you, SS..I appreciate the wishes. Sara
Meadows Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 11:29 PM
A lovely poem. Well done.
Kendrick Avatar
December 16, 2022 at 3:33 AM
Thank you, Jeanette. I appreciate the comment. Sara
George Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 7:15 PM
The gentle shower, the accompanying wind, the fall of ice.. all these together would have made the day very cold, but then came the sunlight's welcoming warmth. Well done Sara ....
Kendrick Avatar
December 16, 2022 at 3:20 AM
Thank you, Valsa for seeing the contrast. I appreciate the understanding. Sara
Rose  Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 2:42 PM
A most endearing poem well performed and placed, high in my book or originals Sara
Kendrick Avatar
December 16, 2022 at 3:07 AM
Why, thank you, Rose. I appreciate the kind review. Sara
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