Rain

Can you hear the drums Angel's crying down God's love Whisper forgiveness

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Skat A

Date: 5/12/2015 12:09:00 PM

Stephanie:) thank you for the uplifting haiku. Love SKAT

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 10/21/2014 10:42:00 PM

Enjoyed much in this morning.Thank you for a nice creation.

Shirin Neshat

Date: 5/15/2009 11:45:00 PM

aww so sweet.

Arany P.

Date: 3/26/2009 10:33:00 PM

wonderful haiku... so well done!! loved this one... you have just made my day so beautiful... as from morning i was feeling guilty! ~ Arany

Date: 3/26/2009 5:20:00 PM

Inspirational thoughts conveyed in just three lines. Thankfully, God is forgiving. Nice use of imagery. Blessings to you for sharing this one with us. Karen

Marie Prance

Date: 3/26/2009 3:30:00 PM

This gives me a peace from God above,God Bless,Marie

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/26/2009 3:02:00 PM

Nice haiku Stephanie, "Angel's crying down God's love" great line...Raul