Rain

Rain
I hear the pitter-patter of rain, greedily savor the whiff of bathed Earth and I see, yet again, that palace frozen in time my home, far, far away. The misty memories of a blissful past lay interred in those walls of faded pink, the heaving groan of the rusted gate sounds as melodic as the chirp of the bulbul. The rain smelt sweeter then, in those bygone days when I'd hold my grandfather's large hand, and my little feet would splash puddles all about. How I feel sometimes, as if only yesterday that large umbrella towered over me amid the incessant drip-drop and that man's booming laughter as we'd walk! And it reminds me then, of that day, embellished eternally in my mind, when even that man, larger than life itself was united with Earth's welcoming bosom. It rained even then, upon the both of us, and trickled down my moistened cheeks, for there was no umbrella over my head. Date: October 26, 2021 6th Place, Onomatopoeia Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Allison Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 12:25 PM
such lovely onomatopoeia woven into your work, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Suresh Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 8:17 PM
Hi Jan, thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it ^^
Agustin Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 5:33 AM
WOW! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
Suresh Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 8:06 AM
Thank you so much Beata! God bless....
Pinet Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 10:31 AM
Congratulations Abhishek! Your delightful poem earned a distinguished place in my onomatopoeia contest, well done my friend, Emile.
Suresh Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 8:23 PM
Hello Emile, thank you so much for your kind words and the award. God Bless!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace