Rain

rain pours down
from darkening sky --
bucket catches leak 

4/17/21
For Line Gauthier's
One Haiku contest

rainstormweatherhaiku

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Funom Makama

April 27, 2021 at 6:28 PM

The height of creativity displayed in the power of imagination. Your ink is powerful

Kim Merryman

May 3, 2021 at 6:47 PM

Thank you, Funom!

Sara Kendrick

April 25, 2021 at 3:28 AM

Been there and done that one plus 25 more. My parents bought a farm and the house that was on it poured rain inside every pot in the house had to catch the leaks. Enjoyed reading your memory refreshing work. Sara

Kim Merryman

April 25, 2021 at 12:52 PM

Thank you, Sara!

Jennifer Proxenos

April 22, 2021 at 9:08 AM

There's a hole in the bucket dear Lisa dear Lisa, so Henry will have to fix - irrelant - I do love your Haiku, Good luck in Line's contest Kim. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Kim Merryman

April 25, 2021 at 12:52 PM

Thank you, Jennifer! I remember that song!