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Rain

Rising from horizon Rush storm clouds dark and low Rapidly melt to make Rhythmic surge of shower Receptive trees soak in Rills run on foliage Rain drops dance with wet leaves. April 17, 2021 Syllable count : 6 per line (howmanysyllables.com) Contest : Pleiades R Sponsor : Kim Merryman

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Date: 4/22/2021 7:11:00 PM
Your poem is a beautiful and vivid fulfilment of your title, Subimal. Congratulations for your fine win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/19/2021 4:55:00 PM
Subimal, I love the line about "raindrops dance with wet leaves"! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/17/2021 3:09:00 PM
This has all the feel of raindrops hitting my skin, love your last line!
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