Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Verse

Rain

Rising from horizon
Rush storm clouds dark and low
Rapidly melt to make
Rhythmic surge of shower
Receptive trees soak in
Rills run on foliage
Rain drops dance with wet leaves.

April 17, 2021
Syllable count : 6 per line (howmanysyllables.com)
Contest : Pleiades R
Sponsor : Kim Merryman

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Susan Ashley April 22, 2021 at 7:11 PM Your poem is a beautiful and vivid fulfilment of your title, Subimal. Congratulations for your fine win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Kim Merryman April 19, 2021 at 4:55 PM Subimal, I love the line about "raindrops dance with wet leaves"! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Michelle Faulkner April 17, 2021 at 3:09 PM This has all the feel of raindrops hitting my skin, love your last line!