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Rain

let the rain pour down i will not drown. let it tap tap tap against my window pane. let the rain drain down from a stained soaked ceiling. let it shower me completely it cannot touch the sunshine in my happy heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/28/2019 9:52:00 AM
With the sun shining in our hearts, nothing can bring us down - not even a tsunami! Love this piece! Pandita
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Date: 3/25/2019 11:21:00 AM
Love it Allen, happiness shines through...
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Date: 3/25/2019 7:46:00 AM
Simply awesome! Superb ending!!
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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 3/25/2019 7:49:00 AM
Thank you Vijay
Date: 3/25/2019 7:14:00 AM
It is jazzy and upbeat, Allen. A fun read!
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Date: 3/25/2019 1:39:00 AM
rain cannot touch the sunshine of happiest heart!/// lovely poem penned
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