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Rain, Tree, Lizard - Haiku

Rain, Tree, Lizard – Haiku wet functionary scaled feet slip, tree knows better reptilian off

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 9/11/2015 8:51:00 AM
Interesting way of nature. Skat
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Date: 9/9/2015 11:02:00 PM
Nice haiku, Earl!
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Date: 9/11/2015 2:54:00 PM
I'll check back as I have here to see how this develops.. You're a great poet, Earl!
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 9/10/2015 5:43:00 AM
Good morning Dave, Thank you for commenting. Glad you enjoyed it. I'm still toying with this one to make it more cohesive. The image is evolving with the language. You know; concise wording. Have a great day. Earl