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Railway Journeys

I felt as though I was inside a giant pipe, that had seats, tables, foods, and drinks, as it did its best to tie the world, into some kind of a giant rubber ball. I saw the outside world changing before my eyes, as though the four seasons were were happening at once! It was the best journey of my life! Date: 12/01/2015

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Date: 1/23/2015 6:35:00 AM
Very imaginative, mmy friend!!...Hugs...Arlene
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/24/2015 12:18:00 AM
Thanks Arlene! ^_^
Date: 1/12/2015 3:30:00 AM
Ex cellent pen Vicky ! I enjoyed your piece dear friend! A 7 from me! I wish you the very best in 2015! Have a very lovely day! :) Love and light ! xxx D."" =
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/14/2015 9:16:00 AM
Hi Dorian. Thank you for your vote and loving my work! I wish you the very best of 2015 too! ^_^ Btw, I'm not Vicky..... ;-)

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