Railway Journeys

I felt as though I was inside a giant pipe,
that had seats, tables, foods, and drinks,
as it did its best to tie the world,
into some kind of a giant rubber ball.
I saw the outside world changing before my eyes,
as though the four seasons were were happening at once!
It was the best journey of my life! 


Date: 12/01/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Smith Avatar
January 23, 2015 at 6:35 AM
Very imaginative, mmy friend!!...Hugs...Arlene
Kimathi Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 12:18 AM
Thanks Arlene! ^_^
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January 12, 2015 at 3:30 AM
Ex cellent pen Vicky ! I enjoyed your piece dear friend! A 7 from me! I wish you the very best in 2015! Have a very lovely day! :) Love and light ! xxx D."" =
Kimathi Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 9:16 AM
Hi Dorian. Thank you for your vote and loving my work! I wish you the very best of 2015 too! ^_^ Btw, I'm not Vicky..... ;-)
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