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'rails of Inspiration'

Contest Name : Inspired
By : Wilma N. Neels

train 
moves me
shape new thoughts
right from the start 
tracks


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on writing and wordslanterne

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James Fraser

June 25, 2011 at 12:48 PM

The wisdom in this short piece would fill anyone's thoughts with hope. Good luck in the contest with this little gem Wilma :)

James Fraser

June 25, 2011 at 12:48 PM

The wisdom in this short piece would fill anyone's thoughts with hope. Good luck in the contest with this little gem Wilma :)

Audrey Haick

June 24, 2011 at 8:05 PM

Hey Wilma, A very lovely Lanterne, perfect for the "Inspired" Contest! Best wishes, always. Much love, Annalise

Robert A. Dufresne

June 23, 2011 at 5:20 AM

okay I give, Wilma! Ya blew mine right off the tracks with this inspiration about inspirations. Very well done! Masterful. Seriously good stuff. love it. Have a good time today no matter who can't stand it !

Sara Kendrick

June 23, 2011 at 4:14 AM

Great that the train helps shape new thoughts..Enjoyed reading your work this morn..Good luck in the contest with this creative one..Thanks for faithfully reading my work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

June 22, 2011 at 11:26 PM

oh,I love trains, Wilma. And my mom does too. Do you travel on them a lot and write poems on them??

Michael J. Falotico

June 22, 2011 at 2:52 PM

Great entry my love.... go to sleep lol... stop tossing and turning lol.... love Michael

Jack Horne

June 22, 2011 at 2:01 PM

lovely piece, Wilma - I haven't tried this form yet and it looks fun : )

James Foulk

June 22, 2011 at 1:37 PM

a wonderful piece of well writtne poetry. thank you for commenting on All Alone Now.

Zzzzz Zzzzz

June 22, 2011 at 1:26 PM

A smooth write, and a smooth way to travel!

Carolyn Devonshire

June 22, 2011 at 1:20 PM

If the old "track" is not moving us in the right direction, we have to find a new one. I haven't seen this contest yet, but love your lanterne. It has universal appeal -- everyone has had to change direction at some point in their lives. Wishing you success, dear. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 22, 2011 at 12:58 PM

yes my best form of travel is a train.. so much scenery to see and so much inspiration gathered.. a lovely entry for the contest Wilma.. good luck with this wonderful words luv..