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'rails of Inspiration'

Contest Name : Inspired
By : Wilma N. Neels

train 
moves me
shape new thoughts
right from the start 
tracks


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James Fraser

Date: 6/25/2011 12:48:00 PM

The wisdom in this short piece would fill anyone's thoughts with hope. Good luck in the contest with this little gem Wilma :)

James Fraser

Date: 6/25/2011 12:48:00 PM

The wisdom in this short piece would fill anyone's thoughts with hope. Good luck in the contest with this little gem Wilma :)

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/24/2011 8:05:00 PM

Hey Wilma, A very lovely Lanterne, perfect for the "Inspired" Contest! Best wishes, always. Much love, Annalise

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 6/23/2011 5:20:00 AM

okay I give, Wilma! Ya blew mine right off the tracks with this inspiration about inspirations. Very well done! Masterful. Seriously good stuff. love it. Have a good time today no matter who can't stand it !

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/23/2011 4:14:00 AM

Great that the train helps shape new thoughts..Enjoyed reading your work this morn..Good luck in the contest with this creative one..Thanks for faithfully reading my work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2011 11:26:00 PM

oh,I love trains, Wilma. And my mom does too. Do you travel on them a lot and write poems on them??

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/22/2011 2:52:00 PM

Great entry my love.... go to sleep lol... stop tossing and turning lol.... love Michael

Jack Horne

Date: 6/22/2011 2:01:00 PM

lovely piece, Wilma - I haven't tried this form yet and it looks fun : )

James Foulk

Date: 6/22/2011 1:37:00 PM

a wonderful piece of well writtne poetry. thank you for commenting on All Alone Now.

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 6/22/2011 1:26:00 PM

A smooth write, and a smooth way to travel!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/22/2011 1:20:00 PM

If the old "track" is not moving us in the right direction, we have to find a new one. I haven't seen this contest yet, but love your lanterne. It has universal appeal -- everyone has had to change direction at some point in their lives. Wishing you success, dear. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/22/2011 12:58:00 PM

yes my best form of travel is a train.. so much scenery to see and so much inspiration gathered.. a lovely entry for the contest Wilma.. good luck with this wonderful words luv..