Rail Dream

rusty rails touching 
    a salty handcar within 
the kingly elk's plain


rusty rails
    salty handcar
camera obscura
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 11:38 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Lisa. I know this is a late welcome but, I have had some very pressing matters going on. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next week or so. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
February 16, 2011 at 8:02 AM
full of imagery and symbolism, good work Lisa.
Mehta Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 6:50 PM
Brilliant haiku with good images on rail dream, Lisa
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 6:18 PM
INteresting haiku, Lisa! Good title.
Kendrick Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 4:05 PM
Good one..I can just see the scene..Sara
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