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Raid of the Fleas

A toddler’s heels wham… flip flop flip flop Annoyed by the sound that runs non-stop, Dad grabs a plug to cover his ears While an army of fleas seem to appear Invading pet cat as child squirts a hose, “I must declare, it’s a raid...I suppose” As father throws kitty out the door, Son plays with bug gadgets...toys' galore! Judy Konos' I Do Declare Contest by nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/10/2014 2:38:00 PM
Fantastic poem! Kids have a way of enjoying games and innocently fooling parents along the way. I like how your mind works, Nette.
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Date: 9/10/2014 1:50:00 PM
this is a lot of fun. i hope you do well in the contest.
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Date: 9/10/2014 1:31:00 PM
- Enjoy reading, Nette :)) - Luck in contest! - I hope the sun will shine on you tomorrow - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/10/2014 1:22:00 PM
Interesting thing to declare..An invasion of fleas is not a good thing..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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