Raid of the Fleas

A toddler’s heels wham… flip flop flip flop 
Annoyed by the sound that runs non-stop,
Dad grabs a plug to cover his ears
While an army of fleas seem to appear
Invading pet cat as child squirts a hose,
“I must declare, it’s a raid...I suppose”
As father throws kitty out the door,
Son plays with bug gadgets...toys' galore!  



Judy Konos' I Do Declare Contest
by nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Em Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 2:38 PM
Fantastic poem! Kids have a way of enjoying games and innocently fooling parents along the way. I like how your mind works, Nette.
Yvonne Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 1:50 PM
this is a lot of fun. i hope you do well in the contest.
Andresen Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 1:31 PM
- Enjoy reading, Nette :)) - Luck in contest! - I hope the sun will shine on you tomorrow - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 1:22 PM
Interesting thing to declare..An invasion of fleas is not a good thing..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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