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Ragtag Rainbows

ragtag rainbows rush -
sun and rainstorm mingling -
white crane fantasies

January 23, 2020
A Nature Themed Haiku with Color Poetry Contest

naturerainbowhaiku

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Jan Allison

Date: 1/29/2020 5:19:00 PM

Super imagery Sam I especially love the alliteration in the first line, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/30/2020 11:53:00 PM

Thank you, Jan, This was such a fun haiku to create. The alliteration was a fun part of the creative process. Hugs to you!

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 1/29/2020 6:05:00 AM

Beautiful. The crane for up-lifting. Kind wishes, Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/29/2020 3:23:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great nature themed haiku, Sam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas

Date: 1/29/2020 1:22:00 AM

Beautiful imagery.. Congrats on your placement Sam..

Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/29/2020 1:27:00 AM

Thank you Jenish. Such a fun challenge!

Charles Messina

Date: 1/28/2020 8:14:00 PM

Back with congrats, Sam. Well done!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/29/2020 1:27:00 AM

Thank you for visiting Charlie! So appreciated. As I said before we both must love rainbows. Blessings!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2020 6:59:00 PM

So glad this was a winner. Congrats

Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/29/2020 12:56:00 AM

Me too. Have discovered I really enjoy writing haikus and I so appreciate all of the encouraging feedback!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/28/2020 6:02:00 PM

Sam, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/29/2020 12:55:00 AM

Thank you Tania. And thank you for the opportunity for write in this wonderful, yet challenging, form!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/28/2020 6:50:00 AM

- A beautiful haiku, Sam - Best wishes in the contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/28/2020 11:08:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, Thank you for your words of encouragement and taking the time to comment. Most appreciated!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2020 5:00:00 PM

this truly is awesome. The poet beneath me thought that same thought!!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/26/2020 7:18:00 PM

Andrea, Thanks to both of you! Have been enjoying haikus. They really demend strong imagery. Something good to work on for a writer!

Charles Messina

Date: 1/26/2020 8:25:00 AM

Awesome imagery, Sam. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings Charlie

Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/26/2020 7:19:00 PM

Hi Charles, Good wishes always accepted. I am blessed by your feedback. Thank you!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/25/2020 4:30:00 PM

Ragtag rainbows...love that cool imagery

Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/26/2020 1:13:00 PM

Hi Kim, Thank you so much for your message. This haiku was such fun to write and has spawned a number of ideas for additional haikus. The feedback of soupers is such great encouraement to continue to write!