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Rags To Riches

a ragged woman shivers and begs in the street - revellers throw up written 20th December for Constance's Winter senryu contest

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Date: 7/19/2020 3:22:00 PM
Your powerful contrast between rich & poor touches upon a sad reality of life, Jack. Well done! Regards // paul
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Date: 4/12/2020 5:57:00 AM
Wow.
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Date: 1/13/2020 1:05:00 PM
Indeed, the contrast is stunning, Jack. You have the knack for the senryu form! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 12/26/2019 7:24:00 PM
Jack, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/26/2019 5:52:00 PM
Jack, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your wonderful senryu ~
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Date: 12/25/2019 2:23:00 PM
- Congratulations, with your winning poem - Marry Christmas and Happy New Year, Jack :) - Greetings from // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/24/2019 5:47:00 PM
oh wow, what a contrast, Jack. I really like this. Congrats for your win
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Date: 12/21/2019 9:49:00 AM
A very harsh Senryu...and way too true..
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