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Raging Fire

Beauty, rest with the stars   a perfect night to behold     longing eyes lock   over two shots   of Chopin chilled     one teasingly taste   and lips are licked   as tongues penetrate deep     we curl into the reckless   taking no for an answer   when the clocks hit midnight     I gently hum to her   as our sins are shrewn   across the floor     our heat melting the chilled air   as fires hypnotically rage into the dawn

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Date: 2/17/2018 6:52:00 AM
Brilliant! Love this style of free verse. Unique. Barely reads like freestyle rather like the romantic period. Fav!
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Date: 2/11/2018 2:22:00 AM
Chilled Chopin, wow. Just one question: do the protagonist take no for an answer or do they not? Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 2/8/2018 6:56:00 PM
phworrrrrr Tim you are on fire with your imagery here my friend a perfect passionate poem I love the line about sins shrewn across the floor! :-) hugs jan xx
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