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June 20, 2023

The Lost Doll Contest by Charles Messina

I was a Tomboy to the core, Went to Kindergarten – hoping for more Than merely dolls and tea sets but some things Like cars and trucks, airplanes with wings All the things that make a boy’s heart sing Also brought me to dreaming of every good thing Despite the tomboy who lives inside this lass, When I entered the kindergarten class I was met with a doll, Raggedy Ann - while This new teacher, with her kindest smile Offered me Ms. Raggedy – I accepted her Despite the thoughts that came in such a blur This is mutiny, revolution… this could create A uprising in my soul, but patient, I’d wait… Ms. Raggedy, once I’d secreted her beneath My desk - I realized that, once lost, I’d bequeath Her to my friend – since then, I’ve decided to become A poem writer – writing about the lost doll who would overcome The tomboy who had won her as a trading tool This lost doll who she’d market became the best in school!

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Date: 7/23/2023 10:25:00 AM
Cute and different Gina - congratulations!
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Date: 7/16/2023 7:51:00 PM
A unique poem, Gina, congratulations:)
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Date: 7/16/2023 11:01:00 AM
Gina, a unique take on the theme! The lost doll, not agreeing with the tomboy, becomes a trade. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/16/2023 8:44:00 AM
A very interesting story written very thrillingly. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/20/2023 12:46:00 PM
Cute one, Regina. I can't recall if I ever had this doll but of course I have seen many of them. I bet Rqggedy Ann and Andy have a colorful history!!
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