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Rage

(Based on a bipolar episode) Agonizing screams inside my head The many emotions that dwell Trying so hard to keep my sanity Deep down I start to swell Got to keep it in, can't let it go For if I do I'll break Want so much to rid the pain Don't know how much I can take Mind spinning out of control Have to escape from this cage Without warning, the demons break free Destroying what's left with their rage

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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Date: 1/17/2009 6:42:00 AM
Dear Alana, so nice to see your featured this week. You really convey the pain of bi-polar in this well written poem. Love and peace, Lainie
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Date: 1/16/2009 5:48:00 AM
First off, congratulations on the feature of this piece this week. The read is great as it is clear and written with perfect rhyme and flow. You so well describe the fluctuation of being bi-polar. Very well written. Michael
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Date: 1/14/2009 3:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week...Raul
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Date: 1/13/2009 7:20:00 PM
Dear Alana, My friend of many years has recently be diagonized as bipolar. I am just beginning to understand her pain. My heart aches for both of you.. Love lainie
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Date: 1/13/2009 5:28:00 AM
You just have to love this effort. The feeling is of complete honesty. Congrats on this super poem. Love, daver
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Date: 1/12/2009 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations Alana, on "Rage" being featured. Few can understand. Don't worry about those and just focus on that teriffic young woman that writes about her feelings so well. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 1/12/2009 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Alana. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2009 11:49:00 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Lana.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/11/2009 2:36:00 PM
Bipolar illness certainly is a challenge which you captured in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured this week. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/11/2009 1:50:00 PM
This is so heart rendering...so emotional. Well deserved to be featured this week. ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/11/2009 1:07:00 PM
Makes me want to hug you big time and chase it all away. Congratulations Alana on having your excellent poetry featured this week. Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
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