Alana Tye Poet Rhyme

Rage

(Based on a bipolar episode)

Agonizing screams inside my head
The many emotions that dwell
Trying so hard to keep my sanity
Deep down I start to swell

Got to keep it in, can't let it go
For if I do I'll break
Want so much to rid the pain
Don't know how much I can take

Mind spinning out of control
Have to escape from this cage
Without warning, the demons break free
Destroying what's left with their rage

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Elaine George January 17, 2009 at 6:42 AM Dear Alana, so nice to see your featured this week. You really convey the pain of bi-polar in this well written poem. Love and peace, Lainie

Michael Degenhardt January 16, 2009 at 5:48 AM First off, congratulations on the feature of this piece this week. The read is great as it is clear and written with perfect rhyme and flow. You so well describe the fluctuation of being bi-polar. Very well written. Michael

Raul Moreno January 14, 2009 at 3:27 AM Congratulations on your featured poem this week...Raul

Elaine George January 13, 2009 at 7:20 PM Dear Alana, My friend of many years has recently be diagonized as bipolar. I am just beginning to understand her pain. My heart aches for both of you.. Love lainie

Daver Austin January 13, 2009 at 5:28 AM You just have to love this effort. The feeling is of complete honesty. Congrats on this super poem. Love, daver

Vince Suzadail Jr. January 12, 2009 at 7:42 AM Congratulations Alana, on "Rage" being featured. Few can understand. Don't worry about those and just focus on that teriffic young woman that writes about her feelings so well. God Bless. Vince

Carol Sunshine Brown January 12, 2009 at 5:28 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Alana. Love, Carol

Brian Strand January 11, 2009 at 11:49 PM Congrats on your feature poem this week Lana.Rgds Brian

January 11, 2009 at 2:36 PM Bipolar illness certainly is a challenge which you captured in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured this week. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Carrie Richards January 11, 2009 at 1:50 PM This is so heart rendering...so emotional. Well deserved to be featured this week. ~ Carrie

Sharon Winter January 11, 2009 at 1:07 PM Makes me want to hug you big time and chase it all away. Congratulations Alana on having your excellent poetry featured this week. Love & hugs, Shar xoxo