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Rage

On a night poured by gush of words Roasted lips flame with charred ash Shrills exploding like molten rods--- Until winds play a dulcet tune In a time of ripped anguish, Healing fervent breath of affection, Unrequited. For Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/22/2019 12:10:00 PM
I agree w/Swetha ... very powerful and intense poem, Nette! Your pen sword cuts to the heart of a matter. You are a wonderfully talented poetess, my dear friend. Love and more love always.
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Date: 2/22/2019 1:09:00 AM
Intense and powerful write :)
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Date: 2/21/2019 8:07:00 PM
very vivid. I see a win in your future!!
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Date: 2/21/2019 6:11:00 PM
I trust you wrote that in the morning because it is not a great thought to sleep on! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 2/21/2019 4:58:00 PM
Intense and powerful nette well written. I wouldn't want to get on the wrong side of you lol. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 2/21/2019 3:05:00 PM
Your intense phrases elevate this to great poetry, Nette! Well penned! :)
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Date: 2/21/2019 2:17:00 PM
- Really intense ... blazing ... wooow - Luck in the contest, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/21/2019 1:03:00 PM
Intense Nette - tense, intense and great - Poetry Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/21/2019 12:17:00 PM
Wow, a super-powerful write here - love it
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Date: 2/21/2019 10:56:00 AM
Yes...i can see how one could sense relief after expressing such graphic images...
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Date: 2/21/2019 7:59:00 AM
I certainly felt the rage in your expressive words..emotions well captured..all the best, Nette.
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