Rag Doll

A rag doll...one of dreams
is loved and cherished... 
Yet, what is not seen
is a small tear in the seams

Passing days 
and times of play
drop small grains 
of pain and reveal delay

In loving hands 
days have passed 
more grains drop
becoming part of the past 

This rag doll....once full of dreams
now empty from a small tear 
in the seams, sits lifeless
on the shelf eternally smiling
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
April 13, 2011 at 1:15 PM
Quite thoughtful and interesting expressions, Clinton
Brown Avatar
April 13, 2011 at 12:11 PM
I am reading such diverse poems here at PoetrySoup. Poet's hearts are bleeding poetry today. That is where the best poetry comes from. It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today J. Continue to write and share it and I will be back to read it. Have a wonderful day and may you find inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
Morehead Avatar
April 13, 2011 at 10:13 AM
Very interesting write, I really liked the ending. Jeff
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