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Rafting

rafting down river
    beneath blue sky canopy --
         songs of nature play

riding the rapids
     tossed up and down to and fro --
          summer crescendo

Copyright © Kim Merryman | Year Posted 2023

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/14/2023 11:24:00 AM This one is just wonderful, Kim. Glad to see it again as i go through this winner list. Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 7/22/2023 4:17:00 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Sam Kauffman Date: 7/14/2023 10:10:00 AM Hi Kim! Wonderful imagery in your "bouncy" haiku! Great sense of motion! Terrific theme choice for a very innovative summer haiku! Congrats and high fives. Going to find a towel to dry off now! Blessings. PS - wonderful to have you back in the soup surfing the poetic waves! Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 7/14/2023 11:17:00 AM Thank you, so much, Sam! I'm glad to be back!

Maria Fernandez-Garcia Date: 7/13/2023 12:25:00 AM Hi Kim. Congratulations to you too...! Wonderful haiku set. Rafting is nice in summer. Have a nice day. Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 7/14/2023 11:16:00 AM Thank you, Maria!

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 7/12/2023 8:05:00 PM A haiku of pretty, scenes, motion and sounds. Congratulations on your win, Kim. :) Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 7/14/2023 11:16:00 AM Thank you, Evelyn!

Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/12/2023 11:41:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A fun write. I enjoyed reading it. Have a blessed day writing away................... Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 7/12/2023 6:56:00 PM Thank you, Paula!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/12/2023 9:41:00 AM - Back with a congratulations on your winning poem, Kim :) - hugs Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 7/12/2023 6:56:00 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Tania Kitchin Date: 7/12/2023 5:32:00 AM Kim, congratulations on your winning placement, enjoyed the movement in this one! Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 7/12/2023 6:56:00 PM Thank you so much for my placement, Tania!

Bill Baker Date: 7/7/2023 5:30:00 PM Fun Haiku, Kim. Makes me want to hit the river again. It is a fun time however I get point to point. I'll be back to read more later. Have a great weekend! Bill Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 7/11/2023 8:36:00 PM Thank you, Bill!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/6/2023 10:00:00 PM Very cool. Loved last line of that second one Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 7/7/2023 9:26:00 AM Thank you, Andrea!

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/4/2023 8:12:00 PM Very nicely done, Kim! Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 7/7/2023 9:26:00 AM Thank you, Kim!

Ilene Bauer Date: 7/2/2023 4:55:00 PM I can picture this perfectly, Kim! Nicely done! Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 7/7/2023 9:26:00 AM Thank you, Ilene!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/2/2023 10:31:00 AM - An exciting summer activity... great written, Kim - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 7/7/2023 9:26:00 AM Thank you, Anne-lise!