Raft

Tim, congratulations on your awesome summer time win. ~SKAT~

This first line catches the reader in a way that few poems manage, well done.Great tanka. Congrats on another fine placing with this piece.

only the now, nice tanka. congrats

such serene and peaceful imagery - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Congratulations on your winning poem in "Sunshine" contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

TIM..:-), CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your awesome poem in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy - Sunshine" contest. Have yourself a sweet night * Luv~PD

Loved the "feeling" this one gave from the first time I saw it and also today. Congrats on your win.

CONGRATS TIM ON AN EXCELLEN T WRITE AND WIN LUV ON SUNSHINE ..

Big congratulations on your win Tim xx

Congratulations on your win in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy-Sunshine" contest Tim. Love, Carol

Congratulations Tim for winning 3rd Place in my contest “Crazy Sunshine”. You filled me up with so much happiness while reading your splendid poem. Thank you so much for your full support . May the sun shines in your life always. Love/hug, Leonora

Very original, Tim. Me likes!

Creative and original! Nice imagery here! Enjoyed it! :)

A smile to my face on this one Tim. Imagery unlimited...fills the mind. One love. Joy Wells

so relaxing! i love the "muscles melting!"

A timeless moment captured...I liked this.

awesome rendition, Tim, leaves one indeed with a sense of isolation...

Unlike Kathryn, I will eat any fish that doesn't eat me first. A lovely lullaby on the ocean wide. Enjoyed your tuna tanka!

Hey Tiim - My birthday is in March. I don't eat fish but love Mother Ocean rocking her child. Beautiful image. Thanks for your insightful comment on Jeanne Marie. Jeannie was my daughter and died in 95 at the age of 21. It was a snowmobile accident in late morning on the brightest sunniest day you've ever seen. love, Kathy