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Radiate Beginnings

Whispering morning 
Gives birth to a sultry sun
A warming haze grows

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Autumn Ehrhardt

December 28, 2011 at 11:22 AM

I like how the sounds of whisper softens to image of the sultry sun.

Kash Poet

September 17, 2011 at 2:12 PM

You are a wonderful poet.I have discovered your poetry only few days back after joining soup in last Nov.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

July 11, 2010 at 10:08 AM

Beautiful imagery, Laura. How are you? Love, Dane

James Fraser

June 5, 2010 at 3:56 AM

What a morning your words picture Laura. I would love to awake to the images you write about. Have a lovely weekend >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 4, 2010 at 7:21 PM

Delightful Haiku Laura... Soup Mail.. luv..

Poet Destroyer A

May 12, 2010 at 9:40 AM

well done on the Haiku, nicely done,..p.d

Sara Kendrick

May 12, 2010 at 6:55 AM

Very descriptive Haiku of the days lately..Sara

Jimmy Anderson

May 3, 2010 at 6:19 PM

Hey Laura, Very nice, Haiku.....Jimmy

Kim Hilliker

May 1, 2010 at 4:14 PM

A elcoming Haiku. Great job!

Andrea Dietrich

April 28, 2010 at 8:59 PM

this is beautiful. HOw did I ever miss it!! Luv , andrea

John Freeman

April 28, 2010 at 8:52 AM

Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest Laura. Thanks for your comment, but it didn't place. Agape, Moses

Jimmy Anderson

April 27, 2010 at 8:24 AM

Congratulations on your win! Thx for your comments on my write...means a lot!...hugs, Jimmy

John Freeman

April 26, 2010 at 11:36 AM

Congratulations on lucky 13 Laura, we need to see if we can't start skipping this one, Hu? And go on to # 14. Lol. Agape, Moses

Andrew Crisci

April 26, 2010 at 11:03 AM

Congratulations on your amazing win, Laura. Your words, so eloquently expressed, add mystery and suspense to the haiku. I love your words choice and imagery. Enjoy your victory and smile! Thanks for your kind comments, Laura. Have a wonderful day. Love and admiration, Andrew.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 26, 2010 at 5:50 AM

Congrats Laura on your winning poem in Raul's contest with this wonderful write describing the photo so perfectly.. enjoy your special victory my friend..luv.. Linda-Marie

Katherine Stella

April 26, 2010 at 4:54 AM

oh I like this one Laura congrats in placing in contest mine brought up the rear lol loved the imagery too thanks for sharing and for your kind comments to my work keep up the great writing

Raul Moreno

April 26, 2010 at 3:46 AM

Laura, congratulations on your success in my Nature's Breath contest...Raul

Cecil Hickman

April 25, 2010 at 11:30 PM

a delightful Haiku and such wonderful visions you have depicted for sure,,I wish you the best in the contest,,and I want to Thank you for all your visits to my words and for leaving yours behind as well,,,Blessings..Cecil