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Radiate Beginnings

Whispering morning Gives birth to a sultry sun A warming haze grows

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Autumn Ehrhardt

Date: 12/28/2011 11:22:00 AM

I like how the sounds of whisper softens to image of the sultry sun.

Kash Poet

Date: 9/17/2011 2:12:00 PM

You are a wonderful poet.I have discovered your poetry only few days back after joining soup in last Nov.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/11/2010 10:08:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, Laura. How are you? Love, Dane

James Fraser

Date: 6/5/2010 3:56:00 AM

What a morning your words picture Laura. I would love to awake to the images you write about. Have a lovely weekend >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/4/2010 7:21:00 PM

Delightful Haiku Laura... Soup Mail.. luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/12/2010 9:40:00 AM

well done on the Haiku, nicely done,..p.d

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/12/2010 6:55:00 AM

Very descriptive Haiku of the days lately..Sara

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 5/3/2010 6:19:00 PM

Hey Laura, Very nice, Haiku.....Jimmy

Kim Hilliker

Date: 5/1/2010 4:14:00 PM

A elcoming Haiku. Great job!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2010 8:59:00 PM

this is beautiful. HOw did I ever miss it!! Luv , andrea

John Freeman

Date: 4/28/2010 8:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest Laura. Thanks for your comment, but it didn't place. Agape, Moses

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/27/2010 8:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! Thx for your comments on my write...means a lot!...hugs, Jimmy

John Freeman

Date: 4/26/2010 11:36:00 AM

Congratulations on lucky 13 Laura, we need to see if we can't start skipping this one, Hu? And go on to # 14. Lol. Agape, Moses

Andrew Crisci

Date: 4/26/2010 11:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your amazing win, Laura. Your words, so eloquently expressed, add mystery and suspense to the haiku. I love your words choice and imagery. Enjoy your victory and smile! Thanks for your kind comments, Laura. Have a wonderful day. Love and admiration, Andrew.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/26/2010 5:50:00 AM

Congrats Laura on your winning poem in Raul's contest with this wonderful write describing the photo so perfectly.. enjoy your special victory my friend..luv.. Linda-Marie

Katherine Stella

Date: 4/26/2010 4:54:00 AM

oh I like this one Laura congrats in placing in contest mine brought up the rear lol loved the imagery too thanks for sharing and for your kind comments to my work keep up the great writing

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/26/2010 3:46:00 AM

Laura, congratulations on your success in my Nature's Breath contest...Raul

Cecil Hickman

Date: 4/25/2010 11:30:00 PM

a delightful Haiku and such wonderful visions you have depicted for sure,,I wish you the best in the contest,,and I want to Thank you for all your visits to my words and for leaving yours behind as well,,,Blessings..Cecil

Abe Lopez

Date: 4/25/2010 7:24:00 PM

nice take on this photo Laura, I can feel the warmth in your writing. good luck in the contest!

Jeralynn Clark

Date: 4/25/2010 6:23:00 PM

Nice Haiku Laura, I think we all hear whispes! Thanks for the comments! Best in contest!!! Love Jeralynn

Skat A

Date: 4/25/2010 6:12:00 PM

Enjoyed this fresh haiku,,Irma