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Written on September 4, 2024

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Softly murmuring, the river’s raspy voice Settles my soul with its rumbling choice, Rustling quietly beneath a glowing moon, Splattered by the sound of the river’s rejoice Light trickles from stars who’re strewn Across flirty skies where dreamers swoon, Leaving the heart full, moaning its needs, While witnesses tell tales much like cartoons Roaring rapids reveal what the mind reads, In stories of crashing winds with its dark deeds, While the river gulps and hiccups on its course, Promising to bring us its astounding proceeds. Waters boom and belch, such a mighty force, Revealing God’s strength, the only true source, Mighty waters rip out a path like a racehorse, One that most gamblers would surely indorse.

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Date: 9/4/2024 9:54:00 AM
A delightful poem that uses all chosen words with great rhymes. You did a wonderful job.
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