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RACING Along the housetops Along the frozen ground Racing! Racing! In the invisible air In the invisible nothingness Racing! Racing! Along the puckered skin Through the surging veins Racing! Racing! And To trace that nature-car down Go with it! And Round! And Round!.................................................................... All’s quiet now Eyes open Just out-of-doors Realization Amazing! How she and I went a Racing! Racing!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/11/2016 7:55:00 PM
Enjoying another oldie while i wait for you to put up a new one, Daver. hope you had a great weekend.
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Date: 2/22/2011 6:55:00 PM
Fantastic write dear poet ! Makes me go nuts waiting for the next Sprint cup races ! *smiles* (I get the picture Sir ! Awesome ! much love, james
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Date: 2/22/2011 5:56:00 AM
Interesting and cool picture of a "racing nature" you have penned here, Dave! And I do believe that you will intensify your German once in a while!...Have a great week and thanky for your kind comments!...Love, Gert
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Date: 2/21/2011 11:23:00 PM
What a cool image, the nature-car. I bet she is a lot better than kia pet.heehee. Cute poem, Daver. Hope you are getting my hotmails? Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/21/2011 12:40:00 PM
Really enjoyed reading this, Daver-- you got me racing through this fun read :D -- enjoy racing some more :)
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Date: 2/21/2011 5:41:00 AM
This is flowing and beautiful. The images race through the head.
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Date: 2/21/2011 5:35:00 AM
Nice visuals you have presented here, daver
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