Rachel

Real beauty
Angelic voice
Cute as can be
Heaven bound
Energetic, intelligent
Loving sister, only daughter

A child in our AWANA class
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
December 12, 2009 at 7:30 AM
Just beautiful >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 1:49 PM
Beautiful poetry ... beautiful tribute to a beautiful girl... enjoyed... luv.. "Sweetie"
Meade Stephenson Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 11:05 AM
A wonderful acrostic you have penned here...thanks so much for sharing~Mary
Bono Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 8:07 AM
Very nicely done.Hopefully all is well with you.
Strand Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 12:53 AM
Excellentb tribute series Doris.May your gifts multiply in new directions in 2010 Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome commnts
Loving Iii Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 3:23 PM
generous all the kids i know are rotten. jhl
Kendrick Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 1:58 PM
She is cute and sings beyond her years. Keep the magical pen flowing, Mom
Crisci Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 7:57 PM
This a lovely Acrostic poem. A wonderful dedication to someone you love. Good luck in the contest. Kindest Regards, Andrew.
H. Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 4:41 PM
Great acrostic Doris! You do well describing people to each different unique point. Thanks for the comments!
Devonshire Avatar
December 6, 2009 at 7:45 PM
I love these poems describing the unique characteristics of each student. It sounds like you get a lot of joy working with them, Doris. Lovely dedication! And I do hope you'll be sharing these writes with them so you can see their grateful smiles. Love, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
December 6, 2009 at 7:12 PM
Beautiful job on this Acrostic Doris. Sincerely, Love, Moses
Pickett Avatar
December 6, 2009 at 6:15 PM
Beautiful write Doris... My sisters name is Rachel.....:JP]
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