Debbie Duncan Poet Free verse

Rabbit Hole

Oh "darn" where did that cat get to? 

Did you ever have that feeling? 
That you keep seeing something. 
Just like out of your vision of sight.
 
That cat will sleep anywhere. 
He makes me so darn mad. 

You know just like in that movie.
You know that movie "don't you" 
The name seems to escape me.


I'll be so late if I don't get a move on. 
I really must feed my Tom Cat first.
He is always disappearing somewhere.

I really must go ~ my tea party is waiting. 
I do wonder if the twins will be guest hosts. 
Maybe he's ran down that rabbit hole again.


He's always playing these sorts of games. 
Here you are, I have found you at last. 
Silly cat ~ he was hiding under my hat. 




1  27  2012  Fri,,, 11pm 
Poetry Challenge #12 on Temple, on another site, one of the guys always did challenges, this one he put up a pic of Alice looking just behind a curtain. This was my take.

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Michelle Mac Donald June 24, 2013 at 6:39 PM Oh, I find that reading something I enjoy will always draw pictures or scenes in my mind...I just had to look up the old original pictures of the "Cheshire Cat". Reading your writes is sending me off on fantastical adventures, Debbie.:) Keep well...love, Mikki Debbie Duncan June 24, 2013 at 7:42 PM Thank you Mikki ;}

Don Johnson June 4, 2013 at 4:27 PM yes cats can almost drive you wild, with little games sweet honey child... Debbie Duncan June 11, 2013 at 6:31 PM Thank you Don ;}

Phyllis Babcock April 17, 2013 at 10:18 AM One book that I have never read and even when I see clips of movies about it somehow it never appealed to my senses and now I wonder why. Must read that book. love phyl Debbie Duncan April 18, 2013 at 12:52 AM Thank you Phyllis ;} you need to watch Johnny Depp.

Jennifer Perry April 9, 2013 at 5:45 PM I loooove AIW....thanks for the visual! Really enjoyed this :) Debbie Duncan April 12, 2013 at 8:43 PM thank you ;}

Bernard Colasurdo April 8, 2013 at 8:48 PM Very cute write Debbie, Made me smile! Thanks! Debbie Duncan April 8, 2013 at 10:29 PM ;}

Robert Johnson April 8, 2013 at 12:31 PM It was the mouse you saw last night. When you thought you saw something just out of sight. The cat was there to see it too. Those things that are just out of view. So when the hairs tickle on your toes. Just remember it could be the mouses nose. :) Debbie Duncan April 8, 2013 at 10:08 PM cute ;}

Sukmawati Komala April 5, 2013 at 1:54 AM how wonderful to enjoy your fabulous write my sweetest sista Debbie :) thank you so very much for sharing the pleasure <3 much luv and lights <3 Sk Debbie Duncan April 5, 2013 at 4:46 PM thank you my sweet friend ;}

Suzanne Delaney April 4, 2013 at 11:05 PM The rabbit in Wonderland is one of my favorite storybook characters ......cute little poem that added some fun to my day Debbie Duncan April 5, 2013 at 12:48 AM Thank you ;}

Daver Austin April 1, 2013 at 7:46 AM That must be the Cheshire Cat, Alice. Like your imagination. LOve, daver Debbie Duncan April 1, 2013 at 11:10 AM Thank you ;}

Duke Beaufort March 31, 2013 at 6:25 PM It's always nice to see a little fantasy weaved into regular existence. (Since I know you do this without drugs). You have a great imagination and make fun connections. I love how you relate things about your life in your work. It is always so refreshing. Anyhow--have a happy easter. Thinking of you and your lovely work! Debbie Duncan March 31, 2013 at 11:28 PM I thank you Duke ;}

Andrea Dietrich March 31, 2013 at 4:13 PM I came to see if you had a new poem and noticed in my remark on this one, I had said hate instead of hat. good grief. But I am sure you knew what I meant!! Robert Johnson April 8, 2013 at 12:26 PM I like the hate remark. Puts quite the mind spinning twist to it. Suzanne Delaney April 4, 2013 at 11:10 PM Andrea: I found where you can edit your posts and it is in a place you would never expect. I am going to make a Blog Post about it. Debbie Duncan March 31, 2013 at 4:32 PM I did not even notice ;}

Bl Devnath March 30, 2013 at 12:13 PM Your last line bears the final. Wonderfully done. Thanks................., loved always, bl Debbie Duncan March 30, 2013 at 2:33 PM thank you ;}

Sara Kendrick March 29, 2013 at 6:49 AM Cute one..Got a chuckle..Enjoyed reading this morning..I plan on adding some more to my work "Death Angel" but I don't know when ..Maybe this afternoon..Sara Debbie Duncan March 29, 2013 at 6:41 PM ;}

Andrea Dietrich March 28, 2013 at 11:30 PM this was charming. I love how he finally appeared under your hate. Cute! Debbie Duncan March 29, 2013 at 11:31 AM ;}

Lucilla Carrillo March 28, 2013 at 11:00 PM This was a good poem. Debbie, what site was that - that they had challenges? I was in one like that. Was that Poet's Work Shop? They always did this and also they would tag someone and that person had to write a poem. That site closed up. Have a Happy Easter..... Lucilla Debbie Duncan March 28, 2013 at 11:30 PM 'Hello Lucilla,,, it was not Poet's Workshop,

Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2013 at 12:17 PM Enjoyable to read, Debbie! - Have a great Easter. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Debbie Duncan March 28, 2013 at 4:33 PM Thank you Anne ;}