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                  Descending
                the rabbit hole
                      of debt
                as he gambles
           away his hard-earned
                   money, his...
                       life is...
                    spiraling
                   downward.
                  His marriage
                   turns shaky
             as his wife threatens
            divorce proceedings if...
                          he
            keeps self-destructing.


                        (Yalto)


Date written: 09/22/2019

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Date: 9/26/2019 7:29:00 AM
The "rabbit hole" for sure!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/26/2019 9:04:00 AM
Thank you, Caren:-)
Date: 9/22/2019 4:17:00 PM
I felt the spiral. Well penned, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/22/2019 4:27:00 PM
Thank you, Line:-)
Date: 9/22/2019 3:32:00 PM
This flows so well to tell a cohesive story..despite the syllable restrictions of your invented form, Edward. Who better to write it that the one who designed it! Kudos!!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/22/2019 4:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay:-) Glad you liked it!