R u for Real?
We don't see eye to eye,
Even when we're cheek to cheek.
I can't keep up with you it seems;
I don't know what it is you seek.
The values that you motivate,
Give you an intriguing mystique.
But your compassion needs an overhaul
Please pardon the critique.
You hide maliciously behind your charm,
Toying with the meek.
Barking orders, playing God;
Like Satan, so to speak.
The innocent demeanor you display,
Can't suppress your control freak.
Because when it comes to calculated coldness,
I'm sorry Sir, You reek!
So if you value this relationship;
Listen to the words I speak.
Be more attentive, tell the truth,
Then work on your technique!
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