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Here lies my dear brother Fred

who passed in the prime of his life.

By huffy old codger shot dead

while shagging the codger’s young wife.



September 17, 2018

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Warren Doll Date: 9/23/2018 9:04:00 AM This is so funny. I can't stop laughing, Well done, John. Login to Reply John Gondolf Date: 9/23/2018 9:17:00 AM Thanks, Warren, glad you enjoyed it. John

Curtis Moorman Date: 9/21/2018 12:33:00 PM Correction to my initial response. I referred to the man as Uncle Fred only to realize it was your Brother Fred. Either way Fred is dead. Login to Reply John Gondolf Date: 9/21/2018 5:04:00 PM Thank you, Curtis, I appreciate it. John

Curtis Moorman Date: 9/21/2018 12:30:00 PM Your Uncle Fred is dead because it has been said, don't take a chance to wear another man's pants. Great poem! Congrats on your win! Login to Reply

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 9/20/2018 8:23:00 AM Hahahaha - big congrats on winning with this hilarious gem! Hugs. Pandita Login to Reply John Gondolf Date: 9/20/2018 8:32:00 AM Thank you, Pandita, glad I could give you a little laugh this morning. John

Tom Cunningham Date: 9/18/2018 10:53:00 PM Back with congratulations John. Tom Login to Reply John Gondolf Date: 9/19/2018 4:00:00 AM Thanks, Tom.

Brandy Nicole Date: 9/18/2018 9:59:00 PM Congratulations John, on your win. :) This made me smile. ~ Brandy Login to Reply John Gondolf Date: 9/18/2018 10:24:00 PM Thank you, Brandy, I glad I could put a smile on your face. John

Sandra Haight Date: 9/18/2018 7:45:00 PM Oh, too funny, John! Very clever! Congrats on your fine win. Sandra :) Login to Reply John Gondolf Date: 9/18/2018 8:25:00 PM Thank you, Sandra, I appreciate it. John

Jan Allison Date: 9/18/2018 2:46:00 PM ha ha ha love it John, what a way to go though lol many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply John Gondolf Date: 9/18/2018 3:10:00 PM Thank you so much, Jan, I appreciate it. John

Line Gauthier Date: 9/18/2018 12:49:00 PM That's supposed to be the best way to go! Congrats on your fine win, John. Login to Reply John Gondolf Date: 9/18/2018 2:58:00 PM Thanks, Line, I appreciate it. John

Jesse Rowe Date: 9/18/2018 12:25:00 PM A lot of dead Freds in this contest. This one at least died happy (presumably). Congrats on your top ten placement in my contest. Login to Reply John Gondolf Date: 9/18/2018 12:35:00 PM Thanks, Jesse, I appreciate it and thanks for hosting the contest. John

CayCay Jennings Date: 9/17/2018 7:55:00 PM Fred never fares well in schemes with dead. A cute one, universally so. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply John Gondolf Date: 9/18/2018 6:06:00 AM Thank you, CayCay.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/17/2018 5:32:00 PM oh my hahaha Login to Reply John Gondolf Date: 9/17/2018 6:37:00 PM Thank you, Andrea.

Ilene Bauer Date: 9/17/2018 11:37:00 AM perfect! i love this one, john... Login to Reply John Gondolf Date: 9/17/2018 11:56:00 AM Thank you so much, Ilene, I appreciate it. I was worried that humor might be a little too much on the naughty side. John

Brandy Nicole Date: 9/17/2018 10:56:00 AM Oops!! He's been caught and now- he's dead. Hmm, I guess he won't do that again. :) Ohhh that's right, he can't. Lol. Something different from your pen, but different is good. Your thoughts brought a smile. ~ Brandy Login to Reply John Gondolf Date: 9/17/2018 11:14:00 AM Haha, thank you, Brandy, this is for the humorous epitaph contest and this is the first thing that popped into my devious mind...at times I have a naughty side as well ;) John

Tom Cunningham Date: 9/17/2018 9:52:00 AM Mmm lol ,just deserts comes to mind. Good luck John. P.S hope its fiction Login to Reply John Gondolf Date: 9/17/2018 9:58:00 AM Thanks, Tom, yes, this is fiction, just a humorous write for the contest. John