Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Free verse

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R a I N - the Lanturne Style

~Rain~
(Lanturne Suite)


Rain
Falls down
Peacefully
Washing clean the 
Earth

At
Times falls 
Violently
With thunders and
Storms

We
Need rain
For growing
Many things we
Eat

Rain
Refreshes
Creates life
All over this
Earth.



Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2010


November.12.2016


~Author's Notes:

The "Lanturne" is a Japanese form or style shaped like a Japanese paper lantern.

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Joanna Daniel November 13, 2016 at 4:57 AM And it rained here this morning, Dorian:) a simple and lovely write:) great form used:) Dorian Petersen Potter November 22, 2016 at 6:29 PM Thank you ever so kindly Jo, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D

Keith O.J. Hunt November 12, 2016 at 4:38 PM Simplicity shines here, truly original. pleasure to read Dorian! Keith Dorian Petersen Potter November 22, 2016 at 6:28 PM Thank you ever so kindly Keith, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D

Jan Allison November 12, 2016 at 4:17 PM I too have written about rain today - a lovely form you have brought to us Dorian:-) hugs Jan xx Dorian Petersen Potter November 22, 2016 at 6:28 PM Thank you ever so kindly Jan, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:) Hugs!D