Quote Prompt 4

"All my fears look like you; you sleep within all my sleepless nights, stretch into the spaces- I shrink inside" -rupi kaur
wide awake in my nightmares you creep and crawl- I can't sleep at all- night tremors encompassed by fear- daybreak saves... November 7, 2016
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Deschler Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 1:15 PM
As Andrea commented, I've had nights like this, too. At least the morning sun is there to comfort us when we wake... You manage to input so much emotion in just a few short lines. Very well done, Laura!
Dietrich Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 3:35 PM
oh my, I have known nights like this, Laura. VERY nicely done!!
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