Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Verse

Quote Me Rumi

Quote me Rumi






Lost in realm of darkness,
as my raw hurts bled lavishly,
Stripped off all the poultice,
I hanged onto for my last breath,
As lashes on the subtle soul
barefaced his malignance,
Little did I know of mends
until the divine light showed in,
With utmost caress on the wounds,
Kindling the whole of me aglow !!





Written Dec 3rd, 2015
For contest by Silent one
Inspired by Quote- The wound is the place where the light enters you.


Awarded 3rd place win

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Richard Lamoureux December 6, 2015 at 9:35 AM I see we both chose the same quote. I like he you wrote yours Upma. Congratulations.

Suzanne Delaney December 5, 2015 at 11:07 PM Congratulations on Your win. Love the way this expands on the quote. Hugs, SuZ

Len Gasun December 5, 2015 at 3:45 AM An excellent verse inspired by the Rumi's quote my dear friend, Dr. Upma! I'm so blessed to read it this afternoon. Thank you so much for sharing and BIG CONGRATS on your win! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Sandra Haight December 4, 2015 at 2:20 PM Powerful thoughts and words, Dr. Upma. Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Sarita Milliner December 4, 2015 at 11:54 AM Wow, this drew me right in!! Congrats!!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores December 4, 2015 at 7:08 AM Congratulations on the placement of the contest Dr. Sharma.

Anisha Dutta December 4, 2015 at 1:19 AM Congrats Upma to win with the wonderful poem. Hugs Anisha D

Scott Williams December 4, 2015 at 12:26 AM Very nicely done Dr. A well deserved win.

Alexis Y. December 3, 2015 at 11:26 PM Dr. Upma, congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis

Jan Allison December 3, 2015 at 6:45 PM Dropping back with my congrats Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A December 3, 2015 at 5:22 PM Dr Upma, Congratulations on your Quoting Rumi Win. SKAT ** Love Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 4, 2015 at 6:40 AM Thank you my dear friend for your constant support ! Appreciate your kind visits !!

Andrea Dietrich December 3, 2015 at 3:33 PM Lots of imagery. This is the kind of poem I imagine will really grab nette's attention!

Jan Allison December 3, 2015 at 7:46 AM Very powerfully penned Dr Sharma good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx